Home Warsan Shire poem
Personification in Home
The poem “Home” by Warsan Shire speaks out for refugees by describing the unthinkable and difficult decisions refugees are forced to make on a daily basis. Shire employs personification and second person techniques in order to portray the idea that no one wants to be forced out of their own home, yet every day, we seem oblivious to the millions who are being displaced in Syria due to the dangerous warfare. These techniques convey this important idea by putting the reader in the refugee’s shoes, helping them to become more aware of the current Syrian refugee crisis.
Shire utilizes personification to emphasize the idea that no one truly wants to abandon their home unless their life is at risk. In the second line of the first stanza, Shire describes home as “the mouth of a shark”, giving the word ‘home’ living characteristics. This portrays the idea that home is forcing you to run, and escape the danger, (the shark’s mouth), that exists where you currently live due to atrocities such as bombing, missile attacks, shootings and sexual assault committed mainly by the main threat, ISIS. Shire also deploys personification in the line, “until home is a sweaty voice in your ear, saying, leave…” She depicts home as being a desperate and distressed voice, urging you to run away as soon as possible. The personification gives home negative connotations, creating an unnerving image of how their once peaceful home, has become a perilous war zone. As well as this, the contradiction of the word home, challenges the reader’s perception of home, as it is usually associated with feelings of safety and comfort. Shire’s use of personification broadens the reader’s understanding of the unimaginable decisions the refugees are forced to make, and the harsh realities of what their once safe ‘home’ has become.
Secondly, Shire employs a second person point of view and first person point of view which helps connect the reader with the refugees. For instance, in the lines, “unless home told you to quicken your legs, leave your clothes behind, crawl through the desert….”, the use of second person portrays a direct and personal image, allowing the reader to feel as though they are in the refugee’s situation, therefore connecting and empathizing with the refugees. It encourages the reader to imagine the trepidation of being displaced and develops the reader’s awareness of the pain the refugees experience on a daily basis. In contrast, Shire also shifts to first person at the end of her poem in the lines where ‘home is a sweaty voice in your ear’ saying, “I don’t know what I’ve become, but I know that anywhere is safer than here.” Giving ‘home’ a voice is powerful, as it shifts the focus onto what the refugees experience and puts the perspective on the place that is deemed dangerous. It helps the reader to view it as a living being, emphasizing one’s emotions towards it and revealing one’s gratitude due to the importance home plays in our lives by providing us with a sense of belonging and security. Shire’s use of first person enables the reader to understand and realize why it is so difficult to abandon one’s own home, a place where memories and attachments have been made.
Finally, the techniques Shire included in the poem, personification and second person, both help to convey the overall idea and Shire’s purpose of the poem. She aimed to change the public’s current, often ignorant perspective on the prevalent and undervalued refugee crisis around the world. Shire did not experience having to flee her home herself, however, she was inspired to give refugees a voice after visiting a group of refugees who had fled from Somalia (Her home country). She explained to her audience, “I wrote this poem for them, for my family, for anyone who has experienced grief and trauma in that way.” She has achieved her purpose of the poem already, as many readers have already been impacted by Shire’s poem, and have woken up to the reality of the refugee crisis. In America, many citizens marched the streets in protest of Donald Trump’s ban on accepting citizens from Muslim countries into America. They held up signs with lines of Home written on them. Shire successfully conveyed the purpose of the poem through her stark and honest words and by utilizing personification and second person technique to reiterate that the refugee’s homes are giving them no choice but to be displaced and to place the reader in the refugee’s situation. Her poem creates empathy and opens the eyes of the reader and exposes them to the inhumane atrocities the refugees faced, and urges them to wake up and make a difference, the central purpose of Shire’s poem.
In conclusion, Warsan Shire uses both personification and second person technique to effectively convey her message and purpose of the poem, that no one would take the risk of leaving their own home unless their survival is at stake, yet is happening to millions of refugees every day. Shire explains to her audience that the refugee crisis is an issue which is becoming an increasing problem and that we must do something about it, otherwise, it will continue to be a large strain on society for future generations. The poem teaches us that we must actively make a difference to those less fortunate by first obtaining empathy and awareness towards the refugee crisis in order to achieve peace in Syria. Antonio Guterres stated this; “What is at stake is nothing less than the survival and well-being of a generation of innocents.”
The Intertextual Relation Between Tell Me How It Ends: An Essay in Forty Questions by Valeria Luiselli and “Home” by Warsan Shire.
Migration is not a contemporary phenomena; it has defined human nature since (or even before) crossing The Bering Strait. Humans migrate for two reasons: they are looking for better lives or they simply cannot stay—the latter being the most important and less comprehended. The idea of someone being unable to stay is easy to understand, but when migrants arrive to their destination, the fact that they could not stay home (and are not simply looking for improvement in their lives) is often inconceivable, and they are treated with mistrust. Migrants in both the poem “Home,” by Warsan Shire, and the essay Los niños perdidos, by Valeria Luiselli emigrate because they cannot stay, and are received with abuse. There is a intertextual relationship (as understood by Barthes) between these two texts; the intertextual relation makes visible the difficulty of migration, and recognizing and understanding this intertextual relationship helps to understand their situation.
Intertextuality, as explained by Barthes, is the relation between texts created by language (instead of by the author). The meaning of the words used by the author does not belong to him because he/she rearranges existing words, and this words already have meanings that are defined by their context. Barthes states that meaning are not property of an individual writer. He affirms that:
“a text is made from multiple writings, drawn from many cultures and entering into mutual relations of dialogue, parody, contestation, but there is one place where this multiplicity is focused, and that place is the reader, not, as hitherto said, the author. The reader is the space on which all the quotations that make up the writing are inscribed without any of them being lost; a text’s unity lies not in its origin but in its destination… the birth of the reader must be at the cost of the death of the Author” (Barthes 1977: 148).
The reader is the one that receives the meaning of every word and connects it to its context: creating intertextuality.
The text by Warsan Shire presents the home of a migrant not as a place for living, but as a place where living imposes danger. The poetic voice in “Home” uses a metaphor to state that the place of belonging of these migrants is dangerous, uninhabitable: “home is the mouth of a shark”(Shire 2). It explains that even if migrating demands a risk, a greater risk would be to stay in their homes: “no one puts their children in a boat unless the water is safer than the land” (Shire 24-25). It shows how the destination is also dangerous and aggressive, but not deathly: “the insults are easier to swallow than rubble than bone than your child body in pieces” (Shire 67). The migrants in Warsan Shire’s text have extremely threatening homes, “home[s] [that] chase [them 12]” (Shire) to their destinations and keep assaulting them; nevertheless, these destinations are safer than their place of belonging.
For migrants, home is dangerous regardless of if it is the place of belonging or of destination. For them, home will never be a secure place. Migrants cannot have a home as is commonly understood in other contexts. The title of Luiselli’s essay shows that; she is speaking for children that have already arrived to to the United States, but she still calls them los niños perdidos. Migrants will, in a way, always be lost because they will not find a home as it is normally understood: safe. Their migratory context condemns it to not belong, to be lost.
Los niños perdidos, by Valeria Luiselli, presents immigrants in the United States, their proses of arriving, the criteria to allow them to stay, the forty questions asked to the children to know if they have a case. Valeria Luiselli translates the answers to the forty questions from Spanish to English, and by doing this, she learns about their personal stories. Migrants in Los niños perdidos, as in “Home,” have also experienced the impossibility of living in their places of belonging, and the rejection from their place of arriving. The danger of these zones does not come from the physical place itself, but from the society and its context. Departers in both texts migrate for survival.
Home in both texts represents danger because the migrational context involves it. The word home by itself does not normally have a negative connotation, but for migrants (that travel looking for survival), it does. The migrational context in the text is what makes the concept of home in the texts be dangerous. The third section of Los niños perdidos is called “Home,” and it explains why home is inhabitable for migrants: “Todos los adolescentes […] responden que sí, que han sido directamente afectados por la violencia de las bandas criminales y pandillas” (Luiselli 69); their places of destination as new homes also have a dangerous connotation but in less degree: “Nos cuenta que Hempstead High está llena de pandilleros […] Le tumbaron los dientes” (Luiselli 74). In the poem, “home is like the mouth of a shark” (Shire 2), but “home [also] chases you” (Shire 12); home is also dangerous as a place of belonging and of destination. The migration context of both texts is what makes home dangerous, creating intertextuality.
The two texts reach the same function: they explain the migrant’s situations in their place of belonging, and how migration is necessary even if part of this violence will accompany them during their journey and to their place of destination. A similar message is expressed throughout two different genres. Poetry and essay are genres characterized for requiring thought from the reader. By expressing a similar message through these genres, it is implicit that the reader should think and re-think in order to understand the migrant’s situation in the same way that the reader thinks and re-thinks in order to understand poems or essays. The texts state by their genres that this topic needs to be thought about in order to be understood.
Both of these texts appear as particularly simple for their genre; they express the message clearly instead of having the reader looking for a hidden meaning. It is not that the texts are simple, but they are stating that this common and apparently simple topic as is migration needs to be though about. Common and clear situations of life should be questioned, connected to others, read about even if they are not unknown. By making apparently simple texts, Luiselli and Shire are showing that common and known situations should also be thought about.
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